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I hope to live life, soul search and find bliss. I seek to get lost and be found again. and again. And to eventually fall in love.

Monday, December 20, 2010

A poem I edited for someone.

Original
When I first saw you out of out of the blue
You touch my heart I felt inlove with you
And I always wanted to do
Is just stare and think of you.
This ordinary man doesn’t know what to do
For when you smile there is a feeling I can’t deny
You are my dream, my everything
just like a rose so sweet and charming.
You remain a mystery to everybody
‘Coz you keep your self away from the misery
But your a girl that I cant ignore
Seeing you is like an oxygen that keep my heart pumping
I know you want to be alone
But for me it’s not my intention
And all I have to do is express to you
This crazy feeling i had for you..

My version
When I first saw you, out of the blue
You touched my heart and I fell in love with you
And all I wanted to do
Was to stare and think of you
I am ordinary and this feeling I cannot deny
For when you smile it's gravity I defy
You are but a dream, my everything
You are as a rose so sweet and charming
It remains a mystery to everybody
how you keep yourself away from misery
You are the girl I cannot seem to ignore
With you my life is far from a bore
You are like the oxygen that keeps my heart beating,
the blood that rushes pumping adrenaline.
I know you want to be alone,
But I know it from the core that it has grown,
the intensity of these feelings for you,
know that I am crazily in love with you.

I liked my version :">

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♥ I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary ♥


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